Writing homework for Ms Kristi.

1. Rich supporting details.
2. the first sentence make me want to read on, because I want to know what are those hundred sounds and smells of happiness.
3. The writer emphasize two senses: smell=smells, and hearing=sounds.
4. When I read the sentence "At the break dawn, my grandma would sing, "Besame mucho como si fuera la ultima vez" which means..." I almost heard it. She chose a very popular song.
5. I would like the writer to mention a smell of some thing, you can not find, but in Puerto Rico, like food, or flower...
6. Some times I get confused, the ideas are not clear enough, I think because the writer was translating.